It was early morning in Karbala, Iraq. Ben Hewitt was sitting in a coffee house with his interpreter Sami. They were sipping coffee and waiting for news of where to make the exchange. Ben had to get Peter out and it had to be now. Under the table was a metal suit case that contained a half million American dollars, the other half million to be handed over when Ben and Peter were safely through customs at the airport. Peter’s cover had been blown and working for the NOC which is a covert department of the CIA he couldn’t turn to them for help, he was able to get a message to them and they called Benett Hewitt.
Ben was told to meet with Paul Ward at the warehouse, he would be filled in on the details at the meeting. He told Janet he had a business appointment and would be back later but he got a sinking feeling on this one and took his 9mm with him. It might be overkill but something told him this was not going to be an easy assignment. It was also going to be his last.
Sam went over and over the story Janet told her in her head as she was driving home. It was almost unbelievable, but she knew Janet was telling her the truth. If Ben was working for the government that would explain how he was able to get the legal documents he needed so quickly. She hoped that she could find Ben alive because he was all Janet had, except for the daughter she gave birth to years ago.
She pulled into her garage, went into her house, gave Bonkers fresh water and food, took a hot shower and went straight to bed. It had been a long day and she needed sleep. She made a mental note to possibly break the date with Mike depending on what other information Janet would reveal tomorrow.
Ah at least he’s alive.. these short snippets from the story is quiet torturous. We want more.
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I’ve always wanted to try some fiction, either on my blog or on Twitter. Need to get up my courage because this is really good.
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Thank you Cynthia, This is my first try at a mystery. I do have one other fiction “JULIA” It’s a romance, incase you want to take a peek. :o)
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I will try to accommodate you. :o)
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Very nice snippet. Is this part of a greater novel one can purchase?
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Wow! What a great compliment. It didn’t start out that way, It started as a short story. Thank you :o)…..
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Keep up the good work.
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Thank you for the comment. You just gave me a shot of confidence. :o)
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You have us all on tenterhooks Patricia.. looking forward to the next chapter. xx
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Thank you, that is a true compliment and thanks for following this story. It has been an honor to connect with you and I am grateful for all you do to help everyone to get their offerings out there. ☺
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